http://roroni.deviantart.com/art/Zap-78957341 I don't care whether you comment on DA or here xD Anyway, I used a lot of techniques from the Lucidity deathrow tut here + some of my own I think its my best peice so far oh and for those who care, yes , i finally made a deviantart account >.>
The lighting can be improved greatly. Those zig zag lines are unnecessary in my opinion. Apart from that, good job. -
thanks for the criticism And yeah, true about the zig zag lines, but they're too far back to remove (assuming you mean the light zig zag lines and not the lightning xD)