Write Me A Short Story

Hey Guys.


I will be offering up a couple hundred creds for this.

But I am running out of time to do my short story. I was up since 7:00
doing homework and I just wont get it all dun by the end of the weekend.


So i need some help..

I need some skilled writers.. 15 or older please. preferable around the
highschool/ university level to write a 3 page prequel for me


i have the idea all layed out in my head.. so you just have to put it on
paper and make it distinctive with vocab etc.

Any ways post here if your interested..

I know its a crazy idea

 

GL homie

 

Topic?

 

If any one has read the short story The Duel.

Well I want the sequel to be about:

Charachters:

Vladimir Kladunov
The man who initially dies at the begginin of the story.. His friend Ivan is sent to tell his mother he is dead.

Ivan Gobulenko
A witness of Vlad's death ( he got shot in the head with a single shot from a revolver in this duel.) The town chooses this man to tell his mother about the death of Vlad. He is munable to do it because of the happiness that the mother (palageia) expresses. He is a calm man and he is the protagonist of the story.

Palageia
The mother of Vlad. Embrased happiness when ivan came to tell her the bad news. cause she thought he wqas visiting for leasure...Umm she has saved up all sorts of roubles (money) to pay for Vladimirs and his wifes wedding. and she is so happy for the wife because she wrote her a letter with love ..


the storyline

Ican walking out the door into the cold winter weaather of Russia..after failing to deliver the news to Vlads mother.he is depressed and he goes to visit the Vlads dead body.. umm..the mother is slowly realizing something is wrong and goes to follow Ivan. She sees ivan turn the corner a couple vblocks away and starts briskly walkinto chase after him. she noticses that Ivan is weeping.. as she gets closer.he stops and takes a trink out of a flask of whiskey... this goes on for a while, past all the stores (remember this is early russia, gun weilding people.. saloons etce etc) past the bank.. the sherrifs office. and stops at vlads fututre wifes house. he walks in and notices her dead body on the top of the stairs in a pool of blood.. he runs out as fast as possible...with more tears dripping down his face.. freezing into icecles the longer he was outside.. cause its cold. right? umm.. lets see.. the mother is still following him.. but being the old woman she is.. its harder for her to keep up with a young athletic man. he runs into his own house just before he gets to the snow covered field where vlads body lays. he grabs a cloth to wipe his tears and cleans him slf up to once again try and tell the mother. mweanwhile .. the mother is passing Vlads future wife house. and notices a letter adressed to her in the postt office box outside of the house. she opens it and reads her letter of greatness and thanks. but she cant live without vlad and needs to be with him. and that the duel was not taken seriously until vlad was killed.

she bursts into a crying scream and runs to the field where all of the duels took place.. she noticed her son.. with a red cirrcle on his forhead. his arms and legs limp and cold. his eyes shut and his revolver by his side. she reads the letter from vlads girlfriend once again.. over and over. she reads it. realizng he pain she has felt.. she starts to feel the same pain.. and startrs to realize why ivan came to the house. she slowly picks up with revolver. looks down the barrel.. and pulls the trigger..

Ivan hears the sound and come running from his home down the pathway. he realizes that all of these great people are dead... because of him.. He was the one who shot and killed Vladimir and start to weep once again.. not only at his own failure.. but his wrong morals. He shot and killed one of the happiest families in the town. after he realizes this, he takes the glove off his right hasnd and grabs his own revover.. the one used to kill Vladimir in the duel..out of his holster in his leather jacket... he also points this to his head. and says.. the world will be in peace.. and pulls the trigger.. and falls slowly right beside the ban he killed.

 

Good luck, i was intrested but im more of a mystikal person i have good imagination for those type of storys.

 

ThAnks for the good luck..

 

I may give it a try... I dunno... How many creds would it be?

 

Depending on wheather or not it is good.

100-800 creds