[[ World.in.focus ]]

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by Nasuul, Jan 24, 2008.

  1. Nasuul

    Nasuul Well-Known Member

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    not as good as your others text also needs to go, but still nice work nonetheless.
     
  3. SJNez46

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    i like this but change the text.
     
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    not really feeling this one
    pen is messy, text needs work, bacground strives to be bright but turns out to be monotone
     
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    I don't really liek the pen tool...But all teother colors look great!Also sharpen the hood part by a wee! :tongue:
     
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    It's a bit different and I like it, but it's too monotone and chaotic.

    Text could use work too :]
     
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    thanks, as i said i wasnt sure about the outcome either lol
     
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    I like the artistic feel, but it needs a little depth. My main problem is not the text style, but the wording. The "World in Focus" kind of leaves me stumped, and I just wonder where you came up with that quote for this piece? Other than that, I believe it could use some work, but it still looks nice. ;)
     

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