I love the right. I would take both texts out, they don't fit/take away from the effects imo. I don't really care for the left, especially the brownish-grey parts. Most of the white pen tooling (I'll assume that's what it is) is pixely on the sides. Maybe blur them a tad. I guess I like the right more because the colors are better imo, and the flow is way better. The right is cluttered and the flow clashes. Good lighting.
Colors = Chocolate. The colors make the tag bro. The effects are disgustingly radical too mate. ^_^ I love it. Light = white chocolate.
Yeah thats really cool man, very different execution for that type of render. And u worked it great. Love the flow and composition of this one. FTW
