Woohoo First LP! XD

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  1. Ravenwings

    Ravenwings Well-Known Member

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    So ... I offered to do something for a very special friend of mine. XD
    Here's the result of 15 hours total of PS-ing:

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    Background is from scratch. Stocks, vectors, some brushes used ... nothing too fancy. The rest are basic PS techniques I've been using [and working on].

    Since this is my first ever LP, comments and criticisms are most welcome. :D

    Thanks!
    ~Rvn
     
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    beautiful
     
  3. Hibridfox

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    Uhm...it looks good butttt, I feel as tho the girls face is too white.:-)
     
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    Thanks, man. :-)

    "Too white" ... ?

    It's actually transparent, lol. That's the background showing. I turned the original photo into b/w and then removed all the white parts, retained the black, and overlayed it onto the bg. XD

    But yeah, I guess it still does need a few more tweaks. :3
     
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    I really don't see anything wrong with it. Awesome.
     
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    Its nice 3 thumbs up!!! 2 thumbs and something else HAHAHHA ;) (no homo)
     
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    Thank you, Casta! :D

    ROFLMFAO, Loko! :rofl:
    Btw, your comment flattered her. XD
     
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    Gøbbartics Frozen Norwegian

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    So you've used Topaz Vivacity, right? :b
     
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    Vivacity? Nope. Topaz Clean to clean the final layer a bit (but the final output after cleaning differs minutely with the original layer before it, 'cept for the bg), and to slightly curl the background. And then gradient maps/adjustment layers after that one, and some blurring/burning/dodging afterwards. :-)
     
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    damn thats sexy my friend
     
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    Good grief, 15 hours, must have been a very special friend! But it's really a nice work. The lines of the girl/flowers/vectors really look as if they are POPPING.

    love it!
     
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    Other than the over topaz kind of it's great
     
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    It's great.
    But I have the overtopaz feeling also and like said before maybe darken her face a bit.
     

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