First has a darker Background, Second is Brighter. Let me know which yall think looks better. First: Second: Im not that bad IMO but i keep getting stuck on Backgrounds if anyone has any suggestions please let me know thanks.
Blend in your render the text is standing out way to much, the sig doesn't seem to flow. Read up some tutorials =)
I agree that the text stands out too much...also there's too much text goin' on. Background could definitely use work as well as the render. I also suggest on reading some tuts
To plain , nothinhg that stands out , except that all the focal falls on the text , but read some tuts mate
