[ Wip ] Artisticrevolution

Discussion in 'Website Design and Coding' started by Psvertjuh, Feb 11, 2008.

  1. Psvertjuh

    Psvertjuh NotYourMonkeyNotYourRobot

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    Just began on this, any suggestions and critics on anything is highly apreciated, I don't give ---- if it's hars or anything, I just want to know what to improve, please do not post in here with "It sucks" or "Could be better". I want to know what to improve

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    As I said it's a WIP, banner needs some more work I think, and the content must be placed already, but what do you think about what's done so far?
     
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    Nice colour scheme, works well together. Its a little hard to really critique something that has so little on it though. Right now I'm not liking the background, just feels a bit messy, but if there was more (which I realise their will be) going on in the page that might not be an issue. Your nav bar looks ok, text is pretty good but I dont like how its all seperated, doesnt end in line with the banner and they could be more detailed. Right now I'd say it definitely has potential.
     
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    It's pretty dark... I think the navigation could use some work, right now it seems a bit basic compared to your banner... And speaking of your banner, it looks pretty blank. I mean, all it really has is a C4D render.

    Keep workin on it! Templates take mucho time.
     

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