Will Smith // V2 Added.

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  1. Retox

    Retox Well-Known Member

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    C&C always much appreciatedd.</div>
     
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    needs lighting source and blending bro. no text??
    its kinda boring imo i know you can do better
     
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    The colours work together, but the whole sig is kinda drab.
    Plus, i see zero blending on that render.
     
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    i agree and maybe get a better flow
     
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    I second the lack of blending.
     
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    I thought the flow was pretty good in this one.. and the depth not awful, but i can agree with a bit of a lack of blending and I will work on it and put up a V2. Thanks a lot for the comments so far guys.
     
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    Any redemption with the V2? haha.
     
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    I like vers one better now that i see v2
    Brown is too much for me
     
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    haha really? damnnnn.. thanks for the comment though man.
     
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    if you erase those lines from his face it will actually look much better than v1. after that all you would need is a nice light source
     
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    Alright, I'll work on a light source.. I think the lines on the face are just somethin I like and I'm not sure why because im sure 95% of the people critising it would mention it as something they dont like.
     
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    what would be awesome is if you erased part of his cheek and threw some robotic tech stuff in there with a layer mask then the lines would fit and make him look like a robot. Now maybe that sounds dumb but it's just what I think would go with the lines lol
     
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    haha no that doesnt sound dumb at all, I might give it a shot when I get a chance to make a V3.. thanks for that comment man, could turn out pretty cool.
     
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    or you can put some filters on the lines and make them look like oversized veins comming out of his face haha
     
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    haha that would be kinda cool if I could make it work too actually haha.
     

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