What To Do Next

i have been working on this for about 20 mintues and i don`t know what to do next here it is when it is finshed i want to call it ethier dreams, my dream, and dreamz but i need to know what i should add to it i am kind of a noob still and plz tell me what to fix here is the sig

 

Just seems a little too over-contrasted, make it a bit lighter.

 

Nice sig

Oh and about that tag....

Its wayyyy overcontrasted and darkened. also my depth perspective seems to be off when looking at that for some reason.

 

thanks for the comments anymore

 

well i am going to be face to face with you mate i really dont like the sig.

How would I improve on it?

I would first start by blending the render a bit into the bg so it doesnt look like it was just placed there.

I would then work on the lighting and contrast of the sig.

creating a better focal point would help and maybe even adding some text.


its a working progress

 

pretty dark but i like it