nice effect, theres just a little bit wrong with the flow on the right side with the c4d used. Also its a bit over-contrasted
No tut? Thats pretty good for just doin your own thing. I always liked the white top/bottom border. Text blends well with everything.. Looking good man
I've got no idea what C4D the others are on about, don't see anything disrupting the flow. Either way. It's over-contrasted, bit boring, bit flat. Text definetely needs to be changed or removed. Really do need to drop the contrast and try to make it more interesting, C4Ds, smudging, anything, brighten it up a bit.