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Discussion in 'Signatures' started by tutman, Jan 4, 2011.

  1. tutman

    tutman Well-Known Member

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    So here are a couple of my most recent work. they are my first signatures in over a year, please rate and comment and ignore the text xD
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  2. [.BC.] David

    [.BC.] David 吉祥物

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    Your art is amazing. Your currents and those new ones. I think you could use a text tutorial though that's all. nice stuff
     
  3. tutman

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    Text has been my biggest downfall. I'll look some tutorials up thanks for the comment hopefully I'll get back into the flow eventually
     
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    Just try to simplify your message into a few words. Full sentences don't really belong on a tag. Find a more fitting font on dafont.com (rather than standard MS fonts) and work on hierarchy between the words you do use.
     
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    work your typo into the tag, make it be a part of instead of 'on' the tag, also never corner typography unless composition can support the placement which is rare, be creative ' treat typo as its a art form within itself
     
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    Fixed the text a little, V2 added
     
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    Nice , now move it up more into compo about 10 pixels on the green smudge tag and the c4d move it up bout 5..
     
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    I honestly dislike it mate you could probably do way better.
     
  9. Za¡n

    Za¡n KEEP IT CLEAN

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    yeah i agree, if you do put a sentence, usually keep it to outside the image like in a black border or across in a way that lets you see it but doesn't take away from the image. sometimes it just doesn't work, so your best off with just going with a word or a small phrase. V2 is better.
     

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