<div align="center">i just put this together and wanting to know ur peoples opion on it</div> <div align="center"> </div>
Too sharp, really over-contrasted, and needs better composition. Try cropping off almost all of the sig to the left of him.
Hmmm lol it was better before actually, lol. now the render just looks unblended, as the entire sig was is overcontrasted. I don't really think you'll be able to fix the sig from how it is now to change this though.
I think its an odd style haven't seen anything like it but I agree its over contrasting and the text is hard to read along with the entire sig being entirely to busy imo =x but you did fairly decent for "just putting together"
way too many sharp colours, text is crap and in general bad blending on the render VERY interesting style though