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First sig in about 2 years.


Tried to fix up the text a bitt... Never was good with it..

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v5

 

looks great for your first sig for about 2 years

text needs lot of work imo and i like v2 the best maybe try one without the border, from what i hear borders "aren't in style anymore" - Broken lol I was putting borders on everything I made and he told me not to looked better to me, thanks Broken

but anyways try not using the border? and the rest looks good to me I think

 

funny you say the text is i didnt even work on the text I just put something on it lol

 

Just got your message

Ya I think the new text you put in there fits more with the signature, IT still looks like you could do a bit more with it but at the same time it seems perfect. Good job

 

Thanks much

 

CnC please

 

Work not so much on the actual text itself, but the placement. Try placing it so the middle point of the text is on his (his) right hand.

 

Attempted what you said

 

v5 is the best 1

 

Yeah man that's better. Try moving it down a bit more, so it's directly on his hand. Compositionally speaking, that's the best place for it.

 

good for someone whos rusty.

I have no ideas what you sig is, work on focal too, experiment w/ b/w

 

Looks sweet, v5 my fav, lighting is better and the text is also better now.

 

v5 for sure. still not a fan of the text either way. but lighting in v5 is an improvement to the rest. keep it up, awesome for 1st in 2 years

 

Thanks much all

 

ver5 is nice, good work