Hmm.. I don't really like it. The red overpowers the tag in my oppinion. Maybe try a different bg color. That being said, It's not horrible. Just need some work. Keep 'em coming and check out some of the tuts. We've got some serious pros here brother. Get a hold of one of X'ed's or Somebody from Bare Canvas. Actually any crew's tut rocks. Keep it up
Yeah I agree with hoplite. At first I couldn't see where Vincent was because he blended in a little too well.
You seem a little new, which is good. It's not a horrible tag, just needs some cleaning up. Like they said, the red all over the whole tag fuses with vincent's red cape and isn't very likeable.