Very Simple Red Layout

Jeez... everyone is so harsh... I honestly don't think it's horrible... it just needs some work.

 

hm....did you make it in paint ms or somethin?

 

other than the diagonal lines in the background it was made in Paint

 

Don't really like it that much..

 

Well it is ugly.. idk where you went wrong but you did...

 

Practice makes perfect. Only problem is when it comes to Web Templates, there is no such thing as perfect.

Keep trying dude.

 

no, the template can not be saved, better go ahead and start over.

 

ok, instead of just ripping on you, I'll tell you what to improve on.

Colors suck, there way to bright.
Layout is poor, the entire site could be done (better) in HTML.
Dont bother putting an advertisment block, nobody would want to advertise on your site
tone down the brightness
give it some sort of layout, everything is blocky and boring, it looks like it was made just in HTML.
go to other template sites and look at how everything is layed out, try something like that.

 

^_^ yea the banner is to simple and makes me dizzy but its ok but to noobish ^_^

 

hmmm nintendo vision, its alrite but u should of added mario and luigi sprites to spice it up since its nintendo.

 

the colours and the way its layout kills it