Venezia

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  1. Retox

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    normally im not one to bump, but... bump.

    I wouldnt mind some comments on this one haha, I'm still not 100% comfotable without the tag dimensions, or photomanipsssssssssssssssssssss.
     
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    sorry man, i looked at it yesterday, clicked on the photobucket link.. then got distracted with your other stuff haha
    anyways about this piece.
    1) Thumbnail looks awsome would be a good avatar
    2)Theres a weird looking cloud of water or smoke in front of the dragon it's dark grey in color and doesn't blend well
    3)on the houseboat to the right of the dragon is that a pair of legs just there? i dont get it lol
    4)The water on the foreground looks very messing
     
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    Sorry for posting 3 times idk why it did that...
     
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    Sorry for posting 3 times idk why it did that...
     
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    hahaha, its ok that you got distracted you made up for it by the TRIPLE post haha.
    1)Haha alright cool thanks, that was just kind of a fluke then I guess
    2)Like the bottom of the wave right in front of it, I kinda thuoght that the shadow of the wave would make sense to be that dark. but I see what you mean, and youre probably right.
    3)Haha I dont get it either I was wondering that the whole time making it, it was part of the stock
    4)Yea it looks worse looking back and its like debris set under water, i didnt do a very good job of it and if I get around to updating this than that will defitaely be somethin I'll work on.

    Thanks for the comment man, really appreciate it.

    So he says in a double post hahahah.
     
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    Water splash looks wrong, sharpen the render, the render doesnt really fit the scene as it looks slightly cartoony.
     
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    Ok haha, I tried on the splash I'm not sure what i'd do differently.. guess I just need some practice haha.

    Anyway thanks for your comment man.
     
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    You are really baggin' on me lol
     
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    hahahh, all jokes.. it was funny though.
     

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