Vash The Stampede

My second try at a render... might have been done before, but I need the practice anyway

 

You missed a spot, and there is a white line going all the way around him. Other than that its nice.

 

its outlined but rest is aight

 

Which spot did I miss?... and I'm going to try and clean up that white line as soon as I get some free time... hard to see when you're working with a transparency

 

Choppy in some places, not using.

 

Nice job, I probably won't use..but nice work!

 

Not a bad job, good stock choice. Dunno if i'll use but good try none the less.

 

always have a contrasting bg under whatever it is youre rendering. that way, you wont miss much.