Tried to do a sprite tag again Im quite pleased with the outcome and such. In retrospect i see that the focal could be clearer, and i could've done some things to the sides. Text is lacking because of my lack of skills when it comes to text, and i just couldn't make it look good CnC!
there is to much empty space and the renders face is completely un-seen in a sence, as it looks like a blob on a body.. which could also take some sharpening. i like the composition but its mono to the effects and the lack of background creates a really abstract consuming depth.. in English.. the lack-there-of a background creates a needless foreground.