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Credits if you use Please

 

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I really want to know how I did with this. :wub:

 

A bit of outlines, it would've been cool if you included the lightning around his arm,

 

K. I still haven't done the whole middle bit.
Barbarian pointed that out, I'm going to do it tomorrow.

Thanks again
Anyone else?

 

I think the render is a bit rushed. Like they said, there are outlines all over the place, and a lot of the edges around Ironman and the other dude are jagged. For your next render, slow it down a little, take your time, and just be patient. A great render takes time and practice.

 

wow, first render, i think its great!

 

Its pretty choppy, I agree that it looked like you rushed it a little. I would suggest taking more time and adding in the lightning.

 

Nice render, It's Ironman and someone else

 

Yes its ironman ;D

 

It is a little choppy around the arm bit still goof for your first render.

 

I seriously want to know to to make renders...

 

outline in some spots... nice in overall i think ;/

 

Some outline but its still good!

 

Keep trying, really choppy in some parts but not bad for your first.

 

nice cut! choppy around hand but rest is nice