Unfinished

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  1. Youngblood

    Youngblood Well-Known Member

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    don't compare me to anyone around/
    the one you can compare me to is the one thug that's heaven bound/
    proof's gone so the crown needs a new king/
    you fat cats think your the best, but the gun'll shave off a few pounds when the bullet's ring/
    though talk is what the cowards bring/
    my flow creeps up your skin like when the doctor inserts the syringe/
    don't expect too much from me like Lupe/
    career blew up then album leaked like souffle/
    respect is the paycheck, money's just a bonus/
    If I don't get it, I'll rewind time like Cronos/
    people hating the south but they need to focus/
    ask a crackhead, my rhymes has the same effect as coke does/
    for inspiration, I explored jada's brain like the magic school bus/
    I'm harder than cold crust/
    and the most important thing between me and my pen is trust/
    cuz if I don't trust it then it won't write/
    and I have to make sure it's mine and don't bite/
    and make sure my flow's tight/
    like the pants of a teenager when he's reading playboy in the dark at night/



    I rather talk than shoot it out/
    I'm so tired on gun wounds and blood spouts/
    sometimes I stare at the clouds/
    I'm tired of detroit, I wanna see other towns/
    see other people and breathe something besides the gun fumes/
    I'm tired of driving by funerals and the cause of death being "gunshot wound"/
    I've been dealt too many mental wounds/
    and I'm begging god for this madness to end soon/
    my life is a mortal kombat like ed boon/
    like a spring flower, i'm waiting to bloom/
    the people around me, they tend to bring me down/
    like the art piece, I'm smiling but inside you see a frown/
    and I'm working harder than those ants trying to build a sand mound/
    music is my life, my brain is stimulated by sound/
    It's my lifeguard when I feel like I'm about to drown/
     
  2. kirbir

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    I like it, sounds deep yet fun to read (if you get me) :)
     
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    thank you hehe Kerbeer
     
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    heh, your welcome honey :)
     
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    *gasp* what happened to just "hun"
     
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    haha, its either hun, sweetie or honey :D
     
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    I liked hun better, it was simple and yet sweet
     
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    Okies, ill say hun a lil more ^_^

    Anyhow, im off to bed, good night hun x
     
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    night
     
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    I'm the greatest
     
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    Ur a spammer, and it sounds weird...but thats maybe cus i despise rap :)
     
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    your the spammer, if you despise it then don't comment
     
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    Sociapath Well-Known Member

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    How can i spam if this is off-topic?

    Every post in this offtopic thing is spam which makes it useless to call it spam.

    And it still sucks
     
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    Why do you say he spams then?
     
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    I hate you :)




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