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Discussion in 'Signatures' started by ~Messiah~, Sep 28, 2008.

  1. ~Messiah~

    ~Messiah~ Well-Known Member

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    i think it looks good..c&c please

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  2. hells

    hells Well-Known Member

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    i love it. soo much detail and good depth. the whole thing is a win, except for the back of her head. i dont like the way that looks.
     
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    She looks claustrophobic with all those C4Ds around her.

    Sorry but it looks like you just placed effects and C4Ds around her. I've seen the original stock so that's why it doesn't appeal to me cause not much was done and it could be executed a lot better. Try blending her in some and working on the overall coloring and effects.
     
  4. aoXLordCruise

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    Agreed with good Depth...

    Good Catch on too many C4D's.... some times less is more when it comes to this

    I would take out the left side border with the V's and work the blend more like Pink said

    BUT we also need to underline the great work you put into it so far ok...
    don't take this the wrong way... Just work it a bit more and you have a definite winner
     
  5. Z.A.R

    Z.A.R Well-Known Member

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    I like it. Kinda has floating head syndrome because of the c4d s. Great detail and depth! It looks like you put that bar on the left side to keep you on the tag and balance it out but, I still slide off the bottom left.
     
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    floating head..... a bit messy and the left side is like a white blob.

    sorry man but i dont really like it, your currents are allot better imo
     
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    Fixed the head. Thanks for comments
     
  8. ~Messiah~

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    No one likes the fixed one?
     

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