Uf!

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by 4v `Burning Phoenix, Aug 12, 2008.

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    Made for a SOTW that's strictly B&W, CnC please?
     
  2. AnythingPink

    AnythingPink Well-Known Member

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    Having a little difficulty distinguishing the render/stock.. Like I see her head but I don't see her neck or chest and it just looks bizarre to me for some reason.
     
  3. It's just her arm and head, the rest is covered.
     
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    looks good, though that light source at the top is a bit much ,maybe just lower the fill and color dodge
     
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    I like it, but the text could be fixed.
     
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    Her shoulder/back aren't covered, but are still cut off, in a bad way. Composition needs work, and I think the text should be cut off at the bottom, instead of near the center.
     
  7. Added a v2.
     
  8. JL Wamm

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    v2 is best bro :D
     
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    somethings missing =\ . focus more on the girl.
     
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    Flow needs work, as well as blending.
    Rest is fine :)

    Nice work :D
     

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