Two New Tags

Hi guys.. CnC plzz on my new tags.

 

First Looks Oversharpend and I Would Burn The right a bit (Nice efx.)
Can't see the second M8
gj

 

^^I was also thinking of blurring the first one but had no time....btw fixed the second one...

 

Burning Would be better I Think make a V2 latr then ^^
second,,Clear The focal and put the text closer to the focal (Left Under the focal)
Not really liking the colors of the second,They don't look appaeling to me
gj,, work on those things

 

^^Thanks for advice and comments...Will try to post v2 of both sigs

 

The first one just as to much stuff going on,

But the secound one is really nice.

Gj

 

When your adding 3d renders, dont just jam them in. When you have them like you do, as a background kinda thing. Dont overlap them, or you get weird static plastic look. And try not to go over the stock so much with the 3d renders.

Remember, more doesn't always mean better.

 

I guess the first one is not that great, all things mentioned to it.
The second one is pretty good as for practicing. The flow is good, there is no real lighting and it looks a bit plain, you could work on that.
The effects are at some parts a bit too sharp, fix that and it will look good.

 

Thanks alot for advice . I'll remember them ..thanks again...
btw thanks everyone for comments and advice