The border is kind of hard to see and the outlines of his face are choppy. You should blend it in more.
the gun should hafta go mate...it doesn;t fit it, maybe use another bitmap font...and use it on none aa and size 8 anyway it needs some tweeking imo evan
Yeah, although the gun goes with the quote, it seems to just be floating there randomly, either blend it in a different way or remove it.