I think your camera focused on the green thing instead of the flower, but it's nice. You've figured out how to get a narrow focus there, and the colors look neat. I wonder though... would it look better or worse if you angled it so that the splash of brown from the dirt was right behind the flower? It might make the colors look even better (might). It looks tons better than your first picture . And the flower is really perdy. Keep playing around ^_^
yeah, kinda picked more the green on the right, rather tan the flower it self. Well lol is liek my second shots ill keep poking the cam around is hard to find flowers and such here in ny. specially now that autumn is coming.