~tried My Bestt~

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by N33byoudead, Aug 12, 2009.

  1. N33byoudead

    N33byoudead Member

    Posts:
    5
    Likes Received:
    0
    Joined:
    Aug 9, 2009
    Im trying to use new techniques & make better signatures, well here is wat I got:

    #1 [​IMG]

    #2 [​IMG]

    #3 [​IMG]

    #4 [​IMG]
     
  2. birdunit

    birdunit Well-Known Member

    Posts:
    312
    Likes Received:
    0
    Joined:
    Mar 27, 2008
    Location:
    California
    First one is cool, but the text is not that great. I would put it somewhere else and maybe change the font.
    In the second one the render the render isn't cut that great and you covered here boobs with your text =(
     
  3. N33byoudead

    N33byoudead Member

    Posts:
    5
    Likes Received:
    0
    Joined:
    Aug 9, 2009

    Thanks for the tips, i just started making different ones. but wat font is good, and ill try to figure out new places to put the font ;) lol
     
  4. Baiternader

    Baiternader Well-Known Member

    Age:
    36
    Posts:
    215
    Likes Received:
    0
    Joined:
    Mar 6, 2008
    Location:
    Illinois... Again
    I would look onto blending the renders into the background... well lessening the edges, makes the render seem more natural to that type of sig.

    All in all good first tries!
     
  5. EJay

    EJay Well-Known Member

    Age:
    34
    Posts:
    66
    Likes Received:
    0
    Joined:
    Jul 23, 2009
    Location:
    Connecticut
    They could all use some more flow
     
  6. Strykor

    Strykor Well-Known Member

    Age:
    33
    Posts:
    1,186
    Likes Received:
    0
    Joined:
    Mar 19, 2008
    Location:
    Germany
    Nice that you tried out different things.

    1:
    The flow of the background is wrong if you look at the sword. The light source should be placed somewhere
    there, too. Simply use a 200px soft brush in white.
    The background is as well to sharp and the style of render and background are not fitting.
    Use some different text, maybe a clipping mask or something, try out stuff, that text is not nice. ^.^

    2:
    I like that one it is pretty sexy for a beginner. ^.^
    You have to look at the colors you use, if you go with such a render,
    some pink and some blue would have done the trick, the thing is that it is
    too dark at the left upper corner and too big.
    The right side is a little too brightened, dunno what you made there and again, work on your text.

    3:
    Pretty much the same as the first one.
    But if you use a car like that one, a stock background would be better so that you
    really "see" it is standing on something. :D
    The light source should be added at the back of the car somewhere. :D You can use
    render effects like that light, dunno what it is called, I got ps in german.
    Just experiment a little bit around.

    4:
    This is my favorite mate.
    But you kinda messed up with the lighting again.
    In the downer left corner it is too dark, from that spot the lighting should actually be going since
    his face is bright. The background looks too boring with just that red/black gradient, use some
    smudging or something to do it.
    But why I like this one the most is the flow you added to it. It is just great haha. ^^
    You somehow kinda learned it, apply it to your other signatures and work on your lighting
    and depth and soon you get better and better and better and .... :)
    You know what I mean.

    Good work
     

Share This Page