not bad, the subject has weird coloring (the black on arms) but its ok maybe burn sum areas around the arm to color match and blend more, lighting is not to bad at all actually its perfect anymore would be overkill, id say darken up lower part by arms and maybe the bright bg behind her also...not to bad
looks alot better on white just the brightness behind her back, maybe if you add a tad of light on her back and arm a tad just to balance it out?
Hey man, like i said on msn, i'm liking it. That suck's that your photoshop had a brainfart though. The left side look's kind of wierd. The second version ftw though. <3