Transformers.

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by Volmorous, Oct 10, 2008.

  1. Volmorous

    Volmorous Well-Known Member

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    Most recent. C&C would be nice. =]

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  2. chipmunk2k5

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    it looks god I like what you did with it but it seems like its missing something, maybe try putting a border on it or something and the text looks wrong to me idk why but overall good job.
     
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    I love this. but try putting the text at the bottom left? just IMO
     
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    Great work.
    I think the text placement is good, mayb change the font?
     
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    looks cool
     
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    Lighting's too obvious, big soft brush does not = light source.
    It's ok, text needs to be removed/changed signifcantly. Blur the left a bit (His right arm) to help with the depth.
     
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    Version 2 added.
     
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    V2 looks better imo good job on that :)
     
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    V2 looks far better, has some depth to it now.
    Still not sure on the text but blurring the arm definetely helped it.
     
  10. Volmorous

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    Thank you.
     
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    Work on the lighting and colors but yea v2 is definately better gj
     
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    Thanks again.
     

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