Transformers

c&c?

 

needs sharpen and color overlays
too many dif colors
work around 1 base color that matches the render

 

Too blurry, and the green doesn't match. Doesn't really look like there's a focal point at all.

 

The green just doesn't match up. Nice job though.

 

The green doesn't match and its a little over blurred. Nice job though

 

Well, I can tell your quite new to graphics, however, that tag looks pretty good. You did a nice job with effects, but the focal point is a little off. Renders often look better a little bit off to the right or left, instead of in the dead-center of the tag. You also may want to work on the lighting, as it seems to be all over the place. Try adjusting the contrast aswell, and maybe tweaking the text by taking off the glow. I like the colors, and the tag flows pretty well. Nice job, 7/10.

 

nice tag as someone said need to be sharpedn would look much better

 

I think it looks pretty good. A little too bright. Work on focal point a little more and it'll be 7.5/10