Third Render

Hi, this is my third render. Could I get some comments on how to make it any better if possible please?

 

Kinda choppy. Try rendering something people might use in their sigs, or other work, becuase if you think, what would you really use that render/picture in?

Quite a nice render, but very unusable.

 

dont like the pic
but u did a gj on the render

 

nice render man

 

man u can send me the render of predator???

 

is a good render but i don't like the img!!!

 

I could totally use that in a Gothic, spooky ass sig/wallpaper, nothing else tho. Good job, Gothic/Grungy is my fav style, so I love it when someone renders a freaky render like this one. Iono why ya'll say it's unuseable...

 

Pretty nice, keep em coming .

 

good render...I`not like pic

 

really nice, will cred if used