The Noob Makes Another One

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by showmikpddr, Feb 20, 2008.

  1. showmikpddr

    showmikpddr Member

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    well this is only my err 3rd or 4th one lol.
    i only started about 5days ago

    i need some feedback. lol i unno what to say about this one actually
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    here added err a couple of fxs

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    and i dnt understand whats wrong with the font or lighting as some of you say,

    and since i r noob at this specifiy and y
    Pixels plz!
     
  2. Legend10

    Legend10 Well-Known Member

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    but bad for you fourth one
    needs more fx
    and improve on ur colours and lighting
    same goes to the text
     
  3. showmikpddr

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    ya i knew i had to do something with the text and i also kinda felt i needed more Fx but couldn't find any good ones =/

    ill work on it

    btw whats wrng with the lighting? Oo
     
  4. flux22

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    1) the blue spot in the left looks bad.thats the only blue i see on the sig,and it draws attention from everything else.
    2)your text is badly positioned,very basic and unblended in any fashion.check out the resource section for font sites or something :)
    3)render poorly blended.
    4)bg very basic and standard,looks like clouds with a blur and color balance
    5)the effects to the right are the only thing that stand out to me,they dont look that bad but due to the rest of the sig,they're hard to spot

    keep working on this if possible.i think you're making a mistake i know a lot of beginners do......tryin to do everything with a minimum of layers.that tends to make everything look jumbled and smeared.take your time,read some more tuts ( ^_^ ) and keep practicing
     
  5. showmikpddr

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    thanks for the input =D
    but i like that blue thing =( [ill tone down on it]

    and now i think i added too much fxs
     
  6. flux22

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    Why yes....yes you did lol. and the fx are random looking.patience is the best way to get things done ^_^
     
  7. diverseartist

    diverseartist Well-Known Member

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    work on bg
    dont make it monotone so it matches the bg
    that ruins it
    get an image and make the rest to match the image, not the other way around
     

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