The Money Tree

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  1. Wynter

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    Based on your last works this is poor.

    The bank notes integrating with the "tree" is poor.
    The tree doesn't look like a tree, looks like something you'd pick out a bush and could be worked on.
    The hand and the grass could be worked on alot more. The hand is too big.

    Suggestion:
    Pay more attention to realism and detail.
    You've used some of the same style you used on your previous work in this work.
    Because one style works for one concept doesn't mean it works for all concepts.

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    Thanks for the tips bud. Yeah, this definately isn't my favourite, but I couldn't think of what else to do to it to be honest so I just left it as is. Hopefully my next one will be better :)
     

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