the focal point and lighting flow well with the render the only problem i have is the text. It seems as if i was just thrown there and not much thought went into it's location. It's taking away from what can be a good sig. lower the contrast a little above his right shoulder just a tad the contrast i think is making that area a big to sharpened.
Ok thanks, I posted a second version with your tips. The text is different and I lowered the contrast above his right shoulder, hope it is what you ment
yea the contrast is better but the text still bugs me idk text is always a bugger to get right in tags... hmmmmmmmm...i would try to do something with the text accent it somehow. maybe some use using the pen tool create highlighted lines that come off the lightning bolts from his shoulder to highligght the text? idk i probably didn't explain it very well sorry even this text makes the sig better imo good job none the less ^^ +rep