Well the inspiration from this came from my roommate, I asked her to pick any stock in my list, and she liked this one. So thats where it came from. Would love some feedback! Thanks gang!
Good lighting, but I think it should be a little softer. I don't know if I can put my finger on it, but the effects just feel kind of random and they don't really seem to mesh together. That's just my opinion though. Keep it up.
Indeed, good Lightning, but maybe you could have turned the lightning layer's oppacity down abit. Overall it has a good flow, but try to blend in the render abit better. Nice job though .
Thanks for the tips guys! I'll work on the lighting, which seems to be the, and if you'll excuse the pun "The Glaring Problem" As far as the effects, I was aiming to basically make it feel like she was going down into water. I'll see what I can do to fix it up some though. Thanks for the feedback, it's always appreciated!
I love the lightning. You should emphasize it more instead of having it behind the render in like the corner.
Ok guys, been working on a V2, so I'll show them in order, I hope I hit what advice all gave. Also thanks to the ones to give me nice comments, thank you! V1 V2 - Settled lighting down, got rid of lightning, add a bit more smudge for depth, and tried a few angles on the background for flow
V2 seems a bit empty, I like V1 better as well as the great lighting from the lightning. A great piece of work.
i like version 1 alot better the lightning strike in my opinion makes the tag the choice of render is great, the effects are great, and so is the text p.s thanks for the rep
V2 is amazing. It looks like water is plashing up from below which is awesome. I don't think that lightning strike previously was needed, it seemed out place. And the softer lighting in the new one is nice.
