dont worry about D911, he is always like that. he just points out nothing really for the post count i think. its alot better now with the recent version. umm go to the tutorial section and look at a random tutorial or a few or something and just read through the steps and see what does what and you will be set.
Alright, thanks. I was looking at a pretty complex tutorial. And the C4ds it was using flowed really well and were smaller, so it looked a lot better. I didn't have any good C4ds that flowed, so mine was lots more full and chaotic. Thanks for all the comments guys!
2nd version looks a lot better, just could use some C4Ds that flow once you find some. Just keep reading tutorials to improve your technique, they definitely help.