The Good Life

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by Volmorous, Nov 24, 2007.

  1. Volmorous

    Volmorous Well-Known Member

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    My 3rd Signature!

    The latest. Just made it this morning while listening to Good Life by Kanye West like a million times. Anyways, it's my 3rd sig here, CNC would be loved.

    V2:
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  2. Anesthetik

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    The text does not fit in that well. and the render doesnt blend that well with the background. maybe if you could make a focal point and help blend in and add some flow, it would work. try looking at the tutorial section for some help. it helped me :-)
     
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    Thanks. I'm not great with text...know anywhere I could improve on it? And not sure what you mean by a focal point. I might, and if I do, I'll try to fix it. Thanks for the critique.
     
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    C4d's just look really random and the colours are off
     
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    [​IMG]

    Tried to blur the outside, didn't work well.

    It'd help if you had some constructive criticism, not insulting comments though, D911...
     
  6. Volmorous

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    Anybody have suggestions on a tutorial or something that helps me with my text?
     
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    text is too bold doesnt really fit. use a cliping mask on text for shure.

    i think the c4d is too strong, but yuo coul make up for that by adding lots of gradient maps and filters. its just not enough on tis own right now
     
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    I used a clipping mask on "The Good Life", you suggestion I use one on the subtext as well. And alright, I'll add some photo filters and gradient maps.
     
  9. Yosha

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    was i was triyn got ay is maybe skip th subtext. it jsut feels liek alot is going on with text
     
  10. Volmorous

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    Alright, thanks.
     
  11. Yosha

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    np mate, keep it up
     
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    X2
     
  13. Volmorous

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    [​IMG]

    New Version
     
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    def better
     
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    It's way to chaotic. It should be more calm. Doesn't even need any text.
     

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