I think it's pretty good, but the light source seems a bit too bright. Also, try to fix the smudging a little bit, it seems a bit too messy.
i disagree with arcangel bro i think the sig is pretty tight and the smudgin gives the effect you tried, nice piece there
.Arcangel. : thnxs for feedback and i agree with you about the light source but i think i did a good job on the smudging Orodreth : thnxs man