That Dream

I know again..not good enough..but still



Second:



-Zain

 

Its really really bright.

 

yea maybe a b/w gradient map

 

Its too bright but nice..
btw Zainu r u Indian.?

 

I think that's a very good idea, the entire thing seems too soft and the render doesn't stand out as a focal much
also maybe a bit too much on that lightsource

 

I thought so

Will see what I can do about the Bright Light

-Z

 

How about the second one now?

Still too bright :blink:

-Z

 

I like v2 !

Great sig =) i like the text

 

v2 is best