Template !

ok so ive been attempting to make templates for about a week now.
and heres my latest creation
and just a note i have permission from nansta to use his tag as the featured art peice

please post alot of comments or criticism as I want to get really good at designing web pages

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/61038532/

 

It's defiantly something different. I just feel as if isn't finished. A little too bright for me though

 

I Dont know what else to do with it though.
but thanks for the comment

 

the looks are good, but you will have to bring more structure into it

 

any suggestions on how i could go about doing that raver?

 

confusing.

really needs some more structure

 

try making to fit the content boxes more toghether and not spread out over the whole page

 

Hmm maybe try some darker colors grays blacks silvers . Look much better in darker colors.

 

maybe ill try your suggestions tonight hopefully