Temp.. Very Wip... Updated

The text on the content boxes is bleh! Use the same kind of text as the text used in the navigation. There are too many navigation buttons. Also, add different text on the navigation buttons instead of "Home" for each one. Dull grey and dull red is not a good color scheme. Try to add more contrast to the colors so that they bring out the content and the header.

I wish you luck on completing it.

 

^the fonts on home are bad cuz i haven't changed them yet. and they all say home for the same reason, thx for the tips on colors.. and there aren't to many content boxes i am using each one..

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updated .. with fonts changed and more text

 

The box around the banner doesnt really fit well.
Plus the little "Screws" look, really bad.
Otherwise its not bad actually, will turn out good.

 

You misunderstood my comment. The text that was on the navigation was better, easier to understand, more practical, etc. Too bad you changed it now.

Also, even if you are using all the navigation buttons, I think too many of them makes the template look very repetitive and "noobish."

 

every template at surreal media has just as many. and they are all clan templates... but thanks for the comment .. and ya i think the screws loook like ---- as well

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i prolly won't end up finishing it anyways

 

Simple... very nice job.

 

I think its will be realy nice site man !! keep its up man ! i like its !! my rate for now is 9/10 good job !