Made a work today, I've been working with photoshop for like 1 week, still noob Please comment!!! (& rate)
It looks too messy. No flow, no lighting no depth. Try to get started with signatures since theyre smaller and a little easier to do.
Large pieces are something even experienced artists have trouble. Start out with a small signature and once you get all the basics down you can start heading into broader territory. For a first it is quite good. Colors are extremely clashing, the effects are very messy making it very hard to discern what is going on in the piece. Colors are oversaturated and the whole thing is in sharp contrast. Some pretty good use of filters in there though.