Ok, I'm new here so plz don't kill me. I know I'm not as good as some of you but I'm pretty happy with the outcome. I really need to work on fonts and effects.
Hmmnn, I think this is one of your first signatures. I would suggest you to read some tutorials posted here. Lets see. The font is drawing away the focal point and the color does not match really. Depth is not there either. On some parts (the head of the render) it seems oversharpened. I will give you some creds so if you find a nice tutorial you can buy it since you are new.