Okay, I basically just changed the template on the site, I think that this is much more proffesional and cleaner overall. Please rate and give your thoughts. <a href=\'http://www.tearitupdesigns.com/\' target=\'_blank\'>Click here to see it...</a> If it looks weird with a freaky repeating background behind the main content box or anywhere else, just reload the page and that should fix it...
yeah, i dont feel the font, not smooth and clean, i dont like the yellow glow. Maybe a light blue one would help it idk.
Agreed with font, Is that pizel font? If so, never super size pixel fonts.. they just look blocky and horrible. The text boxes are okay, but the wires dont cut it, especially going into that logo that has no tech feel to it.
CC - The wire are poor quality and where they end and u have tryed to make them look like they are going into something doesn't look good - The fonts need to be changed for the gfx and the webpage pref, use verdana and slighly bigger as it is hard to read -I don't like glows however thats my opinion, the glow is to big - The rip on the banner is not effective - The gradient effect is to plain, maybe try to add a texture or some tech/abstract in there - The nav bar is out of place and to thick - Learn to code correctly and search google for i frames, or learn to use auto-expanding content boxes and maybe a bit of php, this allows you to have content boxes which can easily be expanded and have more content in them allowing all your templates to fit in them - Some form of logo or coroate identity is needed - You need a form for contacting, it allows the customer to contact at their ease, rather than opening up an email and emailing someone which is alot of hassle - Have a css color scheme and style sheet, the deafult blue link color is not good on your eyes againt a grey background for ease of php add into the body tag ' link="#EEEEEE" alink="#EEEEEE" vlink="#EEEEEE" ' or your own color scheme - the glow in the edges of the content boxes doesn't look good think thats all my constructive crit for now, keep up the work, listen to what people say and feel free to post when you have updated (if you do) the template My comments are constructive and not designed to offend Daz
Please take this as constructive critism, not intended to be mean. My comments: The bottom bar for one, is very dark, and the text on it is black. It is near impossible to read (impossible at my resolution). The text in the banner is just horrid..I'm not a fan of it..and it's a bad use of the glow filter. The wires look like you cut them from somewhere else..and badly at that..or if you made them..you just made them poorly. Also...where the wires go "into" the layout..you have white circles. Well that is kind of illogical..itd either be dark circles or partly white on one side and dark on the other..and you should fade the wires into it to make it look real. In the content areas..you have a black bevel effect with white on its edge then black (or dark grey) again for the content text etc. Looks kinda odd. Might be better just making the text area white..or maybe black.. Also at my res all the fonts in the contents are too small I can't read any of it. Anyways..not sure how new you are..so keep working at it..practice makes perfect =D And again no rude intentions in this post...hehe
