The twirls on the left should be sharpen and not blurred IMO as the dies look empty at the moment. But it's nice overall tho.
Wow, That's a really original piece. It struck me as odd at first, but you what? I really like it. lol The lighting is really nice and the focul is good too. ^_^ Maybe name it something cool. Good work
Reminds me too much of one battosais tags, same focal and also much twirls. Putting that aside, Good effects colors depth I also like the way it has depth but it's at the same time flat, makes it look smooth. Just work on darkening, it looks like some black brushing.