Great example of someone who knows how to use all the stuff of photoshop well, in one sig! The render has nothing to do with the bg IMO... But you made it blend. Not anyone can pull that one out. I applaud.
Well mate I think v2 ain't that of an improvement in text. you made it worse. you should have made the second text a bit thinner. the main text is good nothing wron with that. and don't change the oppicity on ext thats so ugly imo like trying to make white transpirit. <- not able it gets ugly white.