zomg I made another picture this one is for school too, colors are maniped heavily comments and favs on dA are very much appreciated http://alex16.deviantart.com/art/summer-playground-65292354
To be honest I am not a great fan of this, for a start i dont really like the colours much, its too desaturated for my personal liking Also i get the impression that it is meant to be some sort of abstractesque photo but it just looks like some looking down a ordinary slide sorry just my view.
no need to apologize man too bad you don't like it, colors are already way brighter than the originals and I don't really dare making them stronger. and yes I was going for a partially abstract feeling, too bad it didn't work :S btw this is for school, so I'm kinda interested what feeling you think this picture describes...
Not liking the overall scheme of it, idk it might be because of the angle I like this one way more http://alex16.deviantart.com/art/the-appro...-curve-65293072
hmm... might try to fix them, if several people think the colors I'll probly be tunnelvisioning on it again and glad you like the other one kennedy, gonna post that topic tomorrow
try umm changing the angle to be honest, that would be my first port of call, I can sort of see what you were going for but I would seriously take a look at way the top of the slide isnt level with the bottom of the frame, I quite like the desaturation of the photo, gives it a retro'ish look...
