Stuck Stuck Stuck!

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  1. kovan

    kovan Senior Member

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    Ok so I've been trying to get back into some more art instead of only doing logo's and commercial stuff for school. So i'm not as good as i used to be xD

    This is what i'm currently working on, but i am kinda stuck to be honest, i have no idea what to do with this,, it's not finished off course

    I'd appreciate some input or some ideas from you guys, maybe that'll help me out.

    (this is a smaller preview, the actual piece is way bigger)
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  2. SM Ascillor

    SM Ascillor Senior Member

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    so far looks good, been a couple of days since you posted, any progress? Hard to give advice - could use something else, at same time you dont want to crowd it. So having said that, I do think the composition could be better - expand your canvas size to letter proportions and draw the base of the mountain curving downwards - so make it more poster-like.

    Then maybe add the little lights of the houses/jack-o-lanterns at the bottom, maybe keep it sihlouette, subtle of course, keeping the moon as the focus.

    Would like to see the finished product :D
     
  3. kovan

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    Yea i'm busy adding like the silhouette of the village in the background, and yea now that you mention the composition,, it does seem off!

    Thanks a lot for the CnC :) i'll be sure to post the final product
     

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