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Discussion in 'Large Artwork' started by retal, Mar 16, 2009.

  1. retal

    retal Senior Member

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    That's very good for a first compared to what I've seen.

    Try not to steer in the direction of using monotonous tones, try adding some variety. If you look at pictures of space, there are a lot of random colors that somehow manage to blend in with each other nicely.

    Planets and starfield could use more detail. Especially planet textures...

    On the lower left planet, you have this "beam" of light thats tilted on it... it looks more like you were attempted a shadow, which should just be black and not white.

    Hope to see more.
     
  3. OcHo.CinCo

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    Im liking it you fallowed the tut very nicley. How long did it take just curious?
     
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    Thx for the feedback :)
     
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    i like it
     
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    First of all, it's too monochromatic.
    You should give some life in that work, I mean, one colour is good, but in more hues.
    I see some potential here, so keep it up!
     

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