Starwars Sotw Entry

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by Unforgiven Soul, Aug 15, 2009.

  1. Unforgiven Soul

    Unforgiven Soul Senior Member

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    Edit4?: (no seriously im done now)
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    It's really nice
    I like the first one better
    I think if you lowered the opacity of the red near Yoda's head on the second one, it would be better than the first one
    And if it's supposed to be "Unforgiven, you are" then why don't you put Unforgiven above you are? :P
     
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    thanks i might change it eventually but i feel like crap rightnow so im leaving it as it stands, though for refrence do you mean the red tint or the "fire looking stuff" ? lol because i do have a red tint around it aswell but its very low

    also for the text, im just awful with text.. its placement is no exclusion haha.. but unforgiven is longer so i made it brighter and more eye catching to hopefully draw it out first</div>
     
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    I was talking about the firery stuff above his left ear :]
     
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    Nice job, the explosion smoke could blend a tad bit better and the green C4d Effect line thing by his left ear doesn't fit all that well but other than that it's a cool tag =D
     
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    ok i added another edit in lol im done now idc. i dont expect to win or anything haha. im just making a tag :P
     
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    <div align="center">did some more editing xD idk i just cant get the left side to satisfaction xD haha what do you think?</div>
     
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    Right now I'd say edit two is the best, but bring the opacity of that fire stuff I was talking about back up a little bit lol
     
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    The 1st edit ftw.
     
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    You were right Yoda would say Unforgiven you are overall imo nice sig
     

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