it think you should get rid of the thing on the lefttop of the render. Everything exept that is awesome! Great flow and i <3 the stars!
Hi Sexiom. Don't know if you remember me. Anyway, looks good. I think you should make the focal stick out a little more. It does stick out more in the B/W version. And that thing sticking out of the top above the sprite is weird looking. Overall looks good.
OMG thxplz! How's it going?!? Message me with your msn if you want to have a talk, and thanks for the comments, ye, I'll try to get rid of it. It looked good at the beginning, but on the finished product it's just horrible. <3